a good beer-barrel
is not the same thing as a
barrel of good beer
is not the same thing as a
barrel of good beer
a bad beer-barrel
is almost as bad as a
barrel of bad beer
Contributed by Gerald England from The Art of Haiku with the note that they were written about 30 years ago.
References: The Art of Haiku
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Hi Gerald,
Very true - both of them!
Barbara x